Tuesday, February 19, 2013

Hello,

I had not yet posted one of my poems, so here is my "Sampler." A few summers ago, through the Norman Mailer program in Provincetown, I was lucky enough to meet the poet Dean Young. Later, I wrote "Sampler" for him and, hopefully, this explains Norman Mailer's appearance in this poem, as well. (?) It is a cousin to the poem I read aloud earlier today. 

Thanks, everyone!

-- Margot 



Sampler          
           
for Dean Young


Norman Mailer said it was not possible to write in bed
though I have done it all these years                       

and each word would be judged                       
every pregnant pin dot                                               

in the touch-screen tablet
exasperation glowing

still, I hope to learn something
not altogether painful

*

the way I stared at
my mother’s sampler

photographing each lot
as if I’d understand

Pig Apple Pig Pig Apple Sun
our last name

how elaborate were her details
little beads of caviar

*

Dean Young writes in the mornings
and then types up in the afternoons

I would be resting
watching swans in the matelassé

Dog Elephant Apple Nest
Yarn Owl Umbrella Nest Goose

stitch — deep stitch — machine stitch —
Dear Dean




2 comments:

  1. Margot, this is a lovely lyric, and I am most taken with the image of swans in the bed cover:
    I would be resting
    watching swans in the matelassé

    which could also be compressed to a single gesture: I would be watching/ swans in the matelassé, as the latter suggests bed suggests resting. Might you consider separating the two figures into separate poems? Mailer and Young? Most readers would know the former, along with his mythologies, but fewer might recognize (although poets would recognize) Young. There seems to be several possibilities: a sequence of poems, perhaps three, having to do with the habits of individual writers and the speaker's meditation upon them, or else keep this one long as it is, and introduce one last figure, so that we aren't meant to contrast the claims of Young and Mailer, but rather consider various claims. We can talk about this. Lovely diction and lineation.

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