I had not yet posted one of my poems, so here is my "Sampler." A few summers ago, through the Norman Mailer program in Provincetown, I was lucky enough to meet the poet Dean Young. Later, I wrote "Sampler" for him and, hopefully, this explains Norman Mailer's appearance in this poem, as well. (?) It is a cousin to the poem I read aloud earlier today.
Thanks, everyone!
-- Margot
Sampler
for
Dean Young
Norman Mailer said it was not
possible to write in bed
though I have done it all
these years
and each word would be judged
every pregnant pin dot
in the touch-screen tablet
exasperation glowing
still, I hope to learn
something
not altogether painful
*
the way I stared at
my mother’s sampler
photographing each lot
as if I’d understand
Pig Apple Pig Pig Apple
Sun —
our last name
how elaborate were her
details
little beads of caviar
*
Dean Young writes in the
mornings
and then types up in the
afternoons
I would be resting
watching swans in the
matelassé
Dog Elephant Apple Nest
Yarn Owl Umbrella Nest
Goose
stitch — deep stitch —
machine stitch —
Dear Dean
"exasperation glowing" - perfect!
ReplyDeleteMargot, this is a lovely lyric, and I am most taken with the image of swans in the bed cover:
ReplyDeleteI would be resting
watching swans in the matelassé
which could also be compressed to a single gesture: I would be watching/ swans in the matelassé, as the latter suggests bed suggests resting. Might you consider separating the two figures into separate poems? Mailer and Young? Most readers would know the former, along with his mythologies, but fewer might recognize (although poets would recognize) Young. There seems to be several possibilities: a sequence of poems, perhaps three, having to do with the habits of individual writers and the speaker's meditation upon them, or else keep this one long as it is, and introduce one last figure, so that we aren't meant to contrast the claims of Young and Mailer, but rather consider various claims. We can talk about this. Lovely diction and lineation.